varikvalefor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I work for Mann.co now!]

The idea is fine, but the execution could use some work. The character's wrist is poorly defined, and the character is overall a bit "boxy".

HealthySoda responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I was going for a boxy appearance for my character, especially the hat.

And about the wrist... Yea I'm not a fan of the way I drew the hand either, I always thought the thumb looked really odd but I had to keep it that way because I'm no good at hands. The way I posed him could have been better too instead of a slight lean to the left.

[Black-crowned night heron]

"That doesn't look like a he-... Oh."
The clouds don't really match the style of the foreground.

Sevi responds:

I dunno I like 'em. I was gonna do them cel shaded, but I thought this looked better.